Passive Voice
Instruction

When the parents come home to a collection of broken shards on the floor, they turn to their oldest child and demand to know what happened. "The vase got broken," the teenager shrugs.

An official appears before a congressional committee after several million dollars disappeared out of a government account. One senator asks the official to explain, and the official offers, "The money was transferred. The account was then closed. The money was stolen."

Do you see a problem here? No one is telling WHO committed these misdeeds. The sentences are in passive voice, a reversed construction that allows the subject (the person doing the action) to be removed!! To recognize a sentence is passive voice, look for the verb to AFFECT the first noun instead of having the subject DO the noun, and look for a helping verb (usually am, are, is, was, or were) in front of the real verb.

Active Voice -- The subject is up front. Passive Voice -- The subject is in back.
I broke the vase. The vase was broken.
Harold transferred the money. The money was transferred by Harold.
Sharon closed the account. The account was then closed by Sharon.
Sharr stole the money. The money was stolen.

Because passive voice is used to hide blame, many English speakers instinctively distrust people who use passive voice, even if they don't know why. Now, sometimes scientists will use passive voice to put the emphasis on the procedure and not the person who did it ("The heart surgery was performed just after three a.m.") You, however, are not a scientist, and passive voice should not appear in formal writing.

 

Check for Understanding
Directions 1. Decide who did the action. Who does the using in the sentence?
2. Now rewrite the sentence with the subject up front in the sentence.
3. Make sure you put the thing being acted on behind the verb.
Exercise

 

Passive voice is used to hide blame.

 

I was hit by the dodgeball.

 

The victim was attacked by three men.

 

I was told he wasn't coming.

 

The car was stolen by joyriders.

 

Ice cream was served after dinner.

 

 

Internet Resources
 

Perdue OWL Active and Passive Voice
About.com's Active and Passive Voice

 

Last Updated on 7-10-2007